if only i could be everything that i wanted to be
just
this
once
.
.
.
speak to the dark angels
just
this
once
.
.
.
speak to the dark angels
posted by Russell CJ Duffy at Tuesday, March 14, 2006
Tuesday, March 14, 2006
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4 Comments:
If only I weren't here
If only I couldn't hear
or feel or see or fear...
CJ,perhaps you'll wake up tomorrow morning and find you could,
and I may get the above too!
inkblot>>>i am very happy being 'here' and being able to moan about it!!!
raven>>>thanks. now its your turn!
what is interesting is in the first three lines the speaker writes "if only i could be everything," "...shine," "...learn" but in the fouth, by placing "be" on a new line, the speaker wants to simply exist. However, in the next line, the reader finds out the completion of the thought is the speaker wants to be someone else.
For a split second, there is hope.
Love the poem
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